Now go back through the same feedback and find testimonials that are CLOSE BUT NEED REWRITING. Here's all my feedback and conversations: [PASTE ALL WEEK 5 FEEDBACK]

Look for feedback that contains great testimonial content but needs refinement because it's:
- Too casual or conversational for a landing page
- Buried within longer messages
- Needs slight rewording for clarity
- Has the right sentiment but unclear language
- Contains great results but rambling delivery

For each piece that needs rewriting:
1. Extract the original quote
2. Identify the core value/outcome mentioned  
3. Rewrite it as a clean, natural testimonial while keeping their authentic voice
4. Make it specific and results-focused
5. Ensure it sounds like something they'd actually say

Provide:
- Original quote
- Proposed rewrite
- Who said it
- Brief explanation of what you changed

These will need the person's permission before using, but give me polished versions to show them.